my car is on ebay

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bandit12

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 southampton
due to a change in circumstance and needing to free up a bit of cash I have regretfully decided to put my Z on ebay, I would appreciate it if members would take a look at the listing and give me your thoughts? not sure if I've priced it too high? link below, cheers.
http://www.ebay.co.uk/itm/331026076064?ssPageName=STRK:MESELX:IT&_trksid=p3984.m1555.l2649
 
Sorry to hear you have to get rid of her Bandit. Its a shame and i hope all is ok? They are just cars and there will be others hope all is well.

Price wise i think that's very tempting and i wouldn't expect you to have to negotiate to much.
 
I think it would be better if you broke the description text down, either into smaller paragraphs or into item lines as, when you have one large, solid block of text it's much harder for people to pick out details
 
It says you had an inspection done in 2013, that is a future date ...
 
PerryGunn said:
I think it would be better if you broke the description text down, either into smaller paragraphs or into item lines as, when you have one large, solid block of text it's much harder for people to pick out details
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Good point, I'll revise the text. Thanks.
 
OK - honest opinion?

The price looks fine and it seems to be a great car for the price and gives room to negotiate. The advert is terrible.

People are buying a lifestyle.Take to car somewhere nice and get some pictures. Some of the interior and with the roof down too.

The block of text in the advert is too dense, poorly constructed and jumbled up. Makes it hard to read and confusing.

Break it into bullet points and put the key features so they are clear.
Don't keep mentioning things like 'for the age' 'for year'. Mentioned 3 times in first 2 lines
Why mention your taking the head unit out? Just do it.

Hope you get my drift about what to do.
 
Machine monkey said:
Sorry to hear you have to get rid of her Bandit. Its a shame and i hope all is ok? They are just cars and there will be others hope all is well.

Price wise i think that's very tempting and i wouldn't expect you to have to negotiate to much.
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Things are ok just got a few unexpected outlays coming up, I try to not get too attached to my cars so no real hardship but I will miss it if it sells, I plan to get another one sometime next year but a 3.0 facelift if all works out.
 
cj10jeeper said:
OK - honest opinion?

The price looks fine and it seems to be a great car for the price and gives room to negotiate. The advert is terrible.

People are buying a lifestyle.Take to car somewhere nice and get some pictures. Some of the interior and with the roof down too.

The block of text in the advert is too dense, poorly constructed and jumbled up. Makes it hard to read and confusing.

Break it into bullet points and put the key features so they are clear.
Don't keep mentioning things like 'for the age' 'for year'. Mentioned 3 times in first 2 lines
Why mention your taking the head unit out? Just do it.

Hope you get my drift about what to do.
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I would make a crap salesman, I live on the coast so could take some nice sea view pics, I'll do that tomorrow, thanks for the honesty.
 
Swiftly said:
You also have your zed with two different types of alloys in your photos, 108's and Daisy's?
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I included a pic with the original wheels that were on the car when I bought it, they are included in the sale think I put that in the listing.
 
bandit12 said:
Swiftly said:
You also have your zed with two different types of alloys in your photos, 108's and Daisy's?
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I included a pic with the original wheels that were on the car when I bought it, they are included in the sale think I put that in the listing.
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You did bandit12, it's my mistake :oops:
 
bandit12 said:
Swiftly said:
You also have your zed with two different types of alloys in your photos, 108's and Daisy's?
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I included a pic with the original wheels that were on the car when I bought it, they are included in the sale think I put that in the listing.
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Weigh them in for scrap & knock £50 off the ask :P they are a backward move on any Z :thumbsup:
 
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